I Can Improve Your Misspelled And Grammatically Mistakes And Can Rewrote In A Right Form.
Posted By: Anurag Mishra
About this Talent:
It's a wrong paragraph given by my client and I have improved and rewrote the para in right way..
If you think about it, you are a salsman. Much of what you do involvs moving others. This summary will help you become more efective at it. You spend a big portion of your time selling in a broder sense. Trying to convence someone about your opinion, pitch your idea to a colleague or persuade people to read your article.
Here's the corrected text:
"If you think about it, you are a salesman. Much of what you do involves moving others. This summary will help you become more effective at it. You spend a big portion of your time selling in a broader sense - trying to convince someone of your opinion, pitching your idea to a colleague, or persuading people to read your article."
Corrected mistakes:
1. "salsman" -> "salesman"
2. "involvs" -> "involves"
3. "efective" -> "effective"
4. "broder" -> "broader"
5. Added hyphens for clarity in "broader sense - trying..."
Alternatively, you could rephrase for better readability:
"Consider this: you're constantly selling, even when you don't realize it. Much of your daily interactions involve influencing others. This summary will help you boost your persuasion skills. You spend significant time:
- Convincing others of your opinions
- Pitching ideas to colleagues
- Persuading readers to engage with your writing
Become more effective in these everyday 'sales' interactions."
Salient Features:
| Job Price:160 | Duration : 2 Days |
| Location: Rs.Varanasi | Languages Known : english , hindi |
